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Feb 24Liked by Jack Krown

Beautiful!

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Thank you, Mr M!!

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I haven't read anything as beautifully told as this in a long, long time.

I need to sit some place alone and think about everything here.

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You are way too kind, Neena. I and so many others are lucky to have you as readers.

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Thank you, Jack. 🙂

And I'm only being honest when I say this about your writing.

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You've been on a roll! Another winning story!

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Thank you for reading these, Oleg! I’m honestly grateful if a tale transports readers, if only a bit.

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Feb 19Liked by Jack Krown

Beautiful

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I’m glad you enjoyed it!

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I've just turned 60. Recently, my wife and I talk a lot about retirement, money, and how our life will be in ten or twenty years. Sudden illness, or an accident, is what I fear the most.

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Blows, doesn’t it.

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Great story !!!!!

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Thanks you, M!!

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This sounds very much like a town I cycled through while travelling across the inland sea. I couldn't find a town called Ohji, do you know the Kanji?

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I am so glad you read it and it rang true! While it’s based on a true story there is plenty of fictionalization in here, including the name Ohji Town.

The fact however that you can imagine the place from personal travels thrills me though!

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Thank you. A really lovely piece.

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I am so pleased. It came from an actual true story on TV. The moment I saw the segment I knew I wanted to write it. Paint it up, fill it in.

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I see you are a "Potsunto Ikken'ya" fan, like me. Or "Gatsunto Ikkren'ya," as I like to call it.

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Try to watch it every week! Last night’s was weak but there have been a few memorable ones lately.

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